All Comments on 'Always with the Jerks'

Very cute; I like it and hope to see more. :D

Didn't read it fully mostly skimmed but I like what I saw. Hope to see more.

Great storie but if u want 2 stop it nd break my heart go rite ahead lol naw jkin cant wait til the nex one but please make it soon

It's great, but... You had a few mistakes. "Organism" when you clearly met orgasm.

and " It stands out in my head because it was the first time I lost my virginity." You can only lose your virginity once right? I mean, not getting technical where some people say oral, vaginal, and anal, but usually it's just the one time when referred to it in a general way.

But otherwise it's fantastic and I'm definitely looking forward to the second chapter. =]

the title doesn't have any connection to the story that I can see. But "I had four organisms" made my night. Sometimes typos are just too great to fix.

four organisms refers to sperm. Or maybe he is an alien with four, uh, you know. Or maybe her experience was so psychodelic that she was at a loss for words and forgot how to say the big O!

Sequel please! loves it but you can make it longer :)