All Comments on 'Always with the Jerks'

Sequel please! loves it but you can make it longer :)

four organisms refers to sperm. Or maybe he is an alien with four, uh, you know. Or maybe her experience was so psychodelic that she was at a loss for words and forgot how to say the big O!

the title doesn't have any connection to the story that I can see. But "I had four organisms" made my night. Sometimes typos are just too great to fix.

It's great, but... You had a few mistakes. "Organism" when you clearly met orgasm.

and " It stands out in my head because it was the first time I lost my virginity." You can only lose your virginity once right? I mean, not getting technical where some people say oral, vaginal, and anal, but usually it's just the one time when referred to it in a general way.

But otherwise it's fantastic and I'm definitely looking forward to the second chapter. =]

Great storie but if u want 2 stop it nd break my heart go rite ahead lol naw jkin cant wait til the nex one but please make it soon

Didn't read it fully mostly skimmed but I like what I saw. Hope to see more.

Very cute; I like it and hope to see more. :D