All Comments on 'Aly's Awakening'

Oh he owns her now. Between the potential of blackmail, and her own enjoyment of the event, she is now his little fucktoy, subject to any wicked thing he wants.

This wasn't terribly written but yet it wasn't exceptional either. You had decent buildup and focused on some facts which was great but then when it came down to the nitty gritty you rushed it so fast and with so few facts or information it was like you were afraid you'd be caught in church with your pecker out... Slow it down when it gets to the important bits... Enjoy the natural flow of the story, not the rush to nut and be done with it... don't get so squirrely

You rushed it like you were going to get caught in church with your pants down. Slow down!

Good brother and sister story.

Who takes their phone to the toilet with them in the middle of the night??

A bit unbelievable and then as other commenters said all a bit rushed at the end.

Good and hot story. Many people take their phones when they (we) go to the toilet, day and night. Pretty normal. Hot.

Great story. Any story that has more than 3 pages I pass up. There is only so much build up I can stand before I quit and move on. Anyone who felt this was too rushed should have seen this was

only 2.6K words and moved on.

lol gumball nipples?

Sorry MikeRiddle8, I guess maybe I meant that’s what they tasted like. I was too busy fucking my sister to keep it straight.

Women do not have a prostate like men. Sticking your finger in a woman's butt doesn't have the same effect.

Mixed feelings about this story.

It ended abruptly so I could only vote 2 stars.