All Comments on 'Alyssa and Gavin'

"..for better or worse, in sickness or health..."

At first degrading comment about her spouse, the impression was that she was a self centered rich bitch. The twist was she wanted to give her nerdy ex- husband freedom to pursue a more fulfilling relationship out of Love. (...a many splendid thing?)

Great story, Carvohi, thanks for sharing it. I see why you placed it in “loving wives”, but I could also see it fitting in

“romance” as well. So it’s author’s choice, I guess. Regardless, it’s a great story and I’m glad you put it out here for us to enjoy. Thanks again.

5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

"That's because you're stupid sweetheart." Pretty much, but damn if he doesn't love her more than life itself, and ditto for her.

Pretty silly reason for a divorce but it seems completely inconsequential anyway so who cares really?

Amazing. At times hilarious and depressing. True love in the face of a horrible disease.

Funny ,sad, and great

Very nice !

Wonderful.

4th read I guess.

Masterpiece.

10

BRILLIANT!!! a wonderful creative loving story unlike anything I've read on LIT!!

one of my all time favorites! You have an amazing talent for writing 'to the beat of

a very different drummer. Please never change Carvohi! 5 stars and more if i could!

Opinionated1

Very nice

Special story.

What a beautiful story, I loved it⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Beautiful story! Loved it. Had me perplexed also for a while. nixrox, feel like an asshole idiot yet?

Really lovely. Great read.

1 star - waste of time - I barely got past the 3rd paragraph.

Love it!! Too bad there isn't a "Loving Husbands" category.

Simply lovely.

Masterful

5 stars well-earned

5-stars

Damn it!! You know damned well that LW is a garbage bin for the internet dregs.

How dare you write a decent story and post it here.

I am well and truly offended.

Second time reading this one, I think my glasses may need a clean as there ere a few specks of dust that appear to be making my eyes a little misty as I read this one.

Outstanding work!

Well…THAT turned into one of the loveliest little romances ever posted on this site! Just wonderful!

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5 easy *****

Again for this great story and change from the usual garbage.

It was so annoying by the end and I felt sooo sorry for poor Melissa. Having to keep asking "Then what?" Or trying to hurry the story along by guessing what happened next. She probably wanted to get up and leave but her English manners wouldnt let her. 2*. One for effort and one for poor Melissa.

Very good, sweet and short, to the point. Well done, bravo!! 5/5

Sweet.

Lovely

Loved it!!!!

Your first 5/5 from me, and you deserved it too.

Fantastic

Nice quick story. I was thinking that Gavins work in genetics would play a bigger part?

A bit off the beaten path, but a stellar little gem.

Called each other either pet names or "my ex". Still lived in the same house together. I didn't ask and they didn't tell whether they shared a bed, but if it weren't for the "my ex" bit you'd never know they weren't a "legal" couple.

Example # 16,671,484 showing that it takes all kinds...

You should be very proud of this little gem.

This was a beautifully written story.

A pleasant surprise at the end, not at all what I was expecting considering the beginning. Signed: BTW

I liked it! 5*

started a little one sided but ended very loving.

Lovely!

After an hour of typical LW stories I needed one like this. Thank you.

About 1/4 carat. (Grin) 5*

So romantic!

I'd give it a 5, but since I am dead inside, you'll have to make do with a 4.

This is my favorite of this author's tales. My gosh, simply sweet. Like homemade tea in the South.

Can't beat a sweet, romantic story. Well told, nice characterization, and just a slight twist to really sweeten it. Nice.

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EXCELLENT TEENY STORY,JUST5*****.

I'm glad you "had to get this one out." I wish I had a story this good in me.

I enjoyed reading it,thank you for writing the story.

Pretty funny too. That was a sweet and dumb story. Liked it very much.

Well written, well paced, and beautiful overall!

It seems what started as a joke turned into a true love for the ages. Read it again and liked it just as much as the first time.

This has to be my fourth or fifth read. But I just can't stop coming back to it every now and then. It really is what love and marriage is all about. Even if the legal papers say different at the end they never really did divorce themselves in gods eyes or most likely even there own eyes. The rest has know real meaning for it's just paper.

I don't think it should have been longer. Much longer and the climax would have felt too much like a cheat of the reader.

I do hope readers do comprehend the depth of the presentation.. 5

The very BEST

Having now read thousands of submissions and developed my personal TOP TEN, I AM HESITANT TO COMPARE THIS WONDERFUL WORK WITH REQUITAL-SLIP OF THE TONGUE-UNEXPECTED REACTION- JUDITHboth parts-A DADDY'S LOVE-SECOND LOSS-LUCKIEST MAN...TOMMY AND HELEN

Might not have titles correct-apologies

Anyway,

For me

For now

For quite some time hereafter

For my own inexplicable reason

I can conceive of neither a method nor a way

Where I could ever again be so profoundly touched.

Alyssa and Gavin

THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE STORY

The 13th Republic sole Library story

tries to remedy her marriage and maintain dignity. TK U MLJ LV NV

I have enjoyed every one if yiur offerings. Ad hominem attacks on authirs seves no purposIf you chose to get upset

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So visit profilefor story idea, for explicit accounts pfovided tbere. All true life and real, or for photos student took of her, her request.

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THING IS SHE LIVED BEING AN COLLEGE INSTRUCTOR FOR THE PRETENTIOUS AURS BUT ACTUALLY STATED SHE HAD NITHUNG IN COMMIN WITH STUDENT, SHE WAS NIT COMOATUBKE WITH HIM , SHE THOUGHT HE WAS JYS ANOTHER LAZY STID CONSTRUTCTIN TRADES STUDENT UNTIL ONE DAY SGE SAW HUS EXTREMEKY MYSCUKAR ARMS AND SOAKED HER PANTIES.

HE WANTED NOTHING TO DO WITH HER IMPLANTED BREASTS NO MATTER HOW OFTEN SHE SHOVED THEM IN HIS FACE R RUBBED THEM AGAINST HIM. SHE THREATENED TO FLUNK HIM AND HE IGNORED HER. BUT WHEN SHE FOUND OUT HER FEMALE DEPARTMENT HEAD THOUGHT ALL WHITE MALE CONSTRUCTION WORKERS WERE KNUCKLE DRAGGING PREDSTORS SHE ORDERED THESTUDENT TO MEET HER IN HER BASRMENT OFFICE ST 7SM TOREVIEW HIS SEMESTERWORK. THE BUILDING BEING VACNT THAT EARLY IN THE MORNING. ARRANGED IT FORDEPT HEADTO SEE STUDENTDEPARTING OFFICE. NEXT DAY SHE TOLD STUDENTS A NUMBER OF QUESTIONS HAD BEEN ASKED OF HERIFTHE STUDENT WAS BOTHERING HER. DEPT HEAD HADEXPRESSED CONCERN FOR HER SAFETY BEING ALONE WITH STUDENT. STUDENT WAS MORE SCARED THAN ANGRY AND HE WAS FURIOUS. SAID HE WOULD NEVER MEET WITH HER AGAIN. THE INSTRUCTOR COLDLY REPLIED THAT STUDENT WOULD MEETWITH HER WHENEVER AND WHEREVER HEWAS TOLD. THAT THE STUDENT WOULD DO WHAT HE WAS TOLD OR SHE WOULD CLAIM HE HAD ACCOSTED HER DURING THT 7SM MEETING. A SEXUAL HARASSMENT HANDBOOKWAS LEFT ON STUDENT'S DESK EACH CLASS HE TTENDED THST DAY. AFTER CLASS MONDAYTHE FOLLOWING WEEKINSTRUCTOR TOLD STUDENT SHE HAD RESERVEDROOMAT MOTEL6N-205- AND SHEBWOULD PICK HIM UPAFTER HIS LAST CLASS ON WEDNESDAY. HE BEGGED HER TOCHANGE HER MIND BUT SHE REFUSED. THAT AFTERNOON SHE HAD SEX DURING WHICH SHE LEFT DEEP SCRATCHES ON HIS ARM TO MARK HIM THEN INSISTED HE FUCK HER UNLUBED ASS SO SHE COULD FEEL HIS CUM IN BOTH HER HOLES FOR HER DRIVE HOME FROM HELENA TO THREE FORKS.

The day before the motel she told him to meet her at baseball complex. He once again tried to change her mind. She was furious, grabbed him by his sweat pants band, pulled him into a dugout, pulled his sweat pants down and gave him a bliw job. Hebegged her to stop because he heard a car drive up and then tried to warn her about coming in her mouth. She pulled off for a minute told him if they got caught shewould claim rape and the told him to hurry up and fill her throat with his cum. He began usung his fingers to help and finished just before a couple of parents bring kids to practice got out of cars. She then slaped his hand saying she didn't need help making a man cum and never to worry about coming in her mouth because she loved swallowing his seed

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" Isn't it pretty to think so . " - Hemmingway

Carovhi did a fantastic job with frenetic Tommygun paced dialogue . This is really different from anything I remember reading by him before. It reads like a Gilmore Girls episode with serve and volley spoken lines zipping back and forth. That show wore me out but at 2 pages as this story is . Very enjoyable. Whew let me catch my breath.

Full marks.*****

Gave it a five. She was a narcissist to the point that she tried to be " noble " and give him his freedom whether he wanted it or not. I've seen this only once in real life, but, when they went in front of the judge she tried to explain her reasons the judge almost threw it out, until the husband went with it. He agreed to it, however they lived together until he could find another suitable living arrangement. It's been fifteen years, and they are still living together as he said he can't find anything suitable. She is almost in home hospice care. The kids caught on right quick, and once a month he had gone to look at someplace to live and always came back to her with reasons as to why they didn't meet his needs. It's a running joke, however, she is in her last months and we fear for him as well. We his friends and family fear that after she dies he will follow. In an age where people divorce at the drop of a hat, he explained it to me like this. He never gave her a religious divorce, and in Judaism without it you can't remarry. So he said, he went along with the civil one and just kept putting off the rabbinical court date so he never gave her one. As he sees it he is still married and will only marry once. They both still love each other, and she wanted to divorce him because she could not do her wifely duties. I'm babbling here, in short, I can understand him. He loved her enough to give her anything she wanted. I'll get off the soap box, but I feel this should have been in romance.

I didn't, I stayed with her till the end 5*

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

good story and annony hated it, so it must be good.,

While I can understand, and even to some degree AGREE with her desire to give him his "freedom", once it became obvious that he didn't WANT his "freedom", but wanted to be with HER, she should have had the brains AND the heart to accept his decision, and honor his desire and stay married to him (or in this case re-marry him).

interesting different story although I don't think it belongs in Loving Wives - probably Romance

I gave u 5 instead of 4 because inspite of the womans stupidity, I agree she is very much so, it was a love story

She IS stupid!

She divorced him to give him a "freedom" he didn't want and never asked for.

They continue to live as a loving couple, yet she refuses to re-marry?

Makes no sense!

If u ain't read it u should

As I was reading this, I had to keep forcing myself TO read it... it was like I was hating it but had to wait for you to say or do SOMETHING to make me NOT hate it...

And as it continued and she kept seeming more and more vulnerable my feeling for it kept moving towards liking it...

Now, the only thing I hate about it is that she could be so stupid... how long would he have to show her what was REALLY important to him for her to stop thinking he'd ever throw away any time with her for time either by himself or with someone he felt less for...? Loved it over all...

That's what i call Love!!! 5*

Some time ago i decided not to read "loving wife" storys anymore,too much hate ,too much BTB, storys where the wife allmost allways got handed the bad ,cheating part and got demolished for it

Storys like this one here are far too rare ,it's in fact a truely "Loving Wife" story,no cheating ,no BTB just a plain love story with the Wife as a selfless woman giving her man the freedom he doesn't want nor need

LOVED IT!!!!!!!

Although I like the excitement and angst revealed in the stories about cheating wives, occasionally a well written story about a truly loving wife is a pleasant change of pace. This one is a five star!

Some stories achieve the luster of a polished gem. Every word contributes to the finished product leaving no room for deletion or addition. I have read Alyssa and Gavin's story four times now and it more than meets that standard. I sit before the computer with a wan smile and tears in my eyes. I think I love these characters almost as much they love each other.

Very good story. I don't understand how can be any bad comments about this story...thank you

It is a wonderful story and it takes quite a while to get to the meat - then it is delicious.

Thank you -

The category is loving wives and this story is truly an exemplary tale. Thank you!

The category is loving wives and this story is truly an exemplary tale. Thank you!

I really enjoyed the reading. carvohi - Not sure why you need to worry what you write about its not like you are getting paid so write whats going through your head. Whether it has a lot of sex in it or not does not make it a good or bad story to me. It is the writing of the story and the story you should worry about. If you have to get out any more stories 'just had to get this one out' please DO. Thank you for posting. If you keep writing I will keep reading.

Your stories are amazing in how you portray real love - selfless, go-the-extra-mile love. Please keep writing - loving wives are not typically tramps - some are misled by predators as you portray elsewhere. You are showing a different side to marriage that is very encouraging.

Thank you.

I thought this was a great story, good job very touching

People who love each other very much can make demeaning words become endearing! I love that they both loved each other so much, they took care of each the best way they new! One gave 'freedom' because she wanted him to do more than take care of her and one gave protection and care because she was his one and only! Great Story!

Yes! You got it!

Liked it even better the second time I read it! It seems we have little or no control over our emotions. We can only control our reactions to these emotions. One never knows when love will strike. Alyssa played with Gavin's affections, not realizing she too was falling in love. When you truly love someone one of the greatest desires you have for that person is their happiness. Alyssa thought by divorcing Gavin she could set him free to find happiness. Alyssa was Gavin's happiness, thus the conundrum. Thank you carvohi for a great story. One of my new favorites.

Stupid

Just read the comments from HIV. There's proof that Neanderthals remain.

This is a cute, solid, three-star story. I didn't quite understand why Gavin would want to marry Alyssa after learning of her prank, nor could I understand why Alyssa bothered to divorce him when they were still "together" in the end. At that point, marriage is merely a technicality. But I see what carvohi was doing here, and I appreciate the effort.

As for Harry, I once posted a story where Harry was the main character (and his last name was "Carvohi!") The main complaint I heard was that readers couldn't connect with Harry because he was too "crusty." I'm beginning to think, however, that I didn't make him crusty enough!

Thanks for sharing your story, carvohi. You crank them out like Stephen King, and for that, I'm envious. Keep 'em coming.

A story about a real LOVING wife, how wonderful. I often moan about the whole `how we met' thing in stories, but in this one it's totally relevant.

You are bound to get detractors, who only get there sex vicariously, bemoaning the lack of stimulation. So what, you told them up front and they didn't have to read it.

I thought it was a charming tale and you disguised the reason for the divorce well.

Well done.

For the read.

It makes no sense at all that this story is posted here. It's boring, the characters never feel real, and as I said it is not even remotely a Loving Wives story. An extremely poor entry.

The last serious LW story ITS ONLY FAIR by Vandorn I sang high praises. so the fact that you are too fucking stupid to see that I am NOT at a BTB type of guy ..is NOT my problem .

I made my point with clear and with sound reasoning you asshole. Most BTB do not.

Carvohi idiot post reply not withstanding... my point is that this was NOT just 1 Joke. This has NOTHING to do with man / woman. One Human being INTENTIONALLY shit of another for no good reason.

Alyssa openly and willing engaged in a Devious twisted scheme that went on for MONTHS and was directed at a guy who did NOTHING wrong but fall in love with a scumbag.

only a mental retard like Crapvohi could write a story like this and have the idiot husband Gavin forgive without 1 second of hesitation AND then proceed to marry her.

Over there we have cuckolds dreamily eating cream pies. Over here we have real love and the natural courage it engenders. Good show.

I agree with another comment that this could have been a bit longer. I would have liked to get more about the couple and I think you could have played 'not so loving' wives deception a bit longer. It might have made the final reveal even sweeter. But it was a very enjoyable read.

Comments are so much fun in this genre. I can almost understand most of the one on this story. Sure, folks might get the science wrong or not realize that not everyone in the House of Lords is impoverished. (how to you eliminate that double negative?).

But then we get Harryin VA! I sometimes think that maybe he is trying to parody the BTB crowd but just isn't able to be funny about it. But mostly, I end up sad. I cannot imagine the life that would fill someone with that much anger and hate. And thank God that it wasn't me that suffered it.

Head and shoulders above most entries anywhere on this site. You are among the few writers that are keeping LW above the total trash heap that it has almost become.

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you are wrong. This nests perfectly in Loving Wives. Much better than all the SM and cuckold fetish crap.

A really "got me in the end" story. Well done! The dialogue between the two "lovers" is so very typical of bright self-assured "totally into you" couples. I've known a couple like this, just not this situation, and it is so wonderful to be around them and listen to their "loving" teasing and watch them leave hand in hand at the end.

Garbage that is in the wrong category.

There were three human genre; Home-sapiens, Neanderthals, and another even less well know group called the Denisovans. Only Homo-sapiens survived. However, Neanderthals and Homo-sapiens interacted, cohabited, and produced fertile offspring. In Asia homo-sapiens did likewise with the Denisovan genre. Neanderthals were human. Science supposes their extinction was due to a lower rate of fecundity. The evidence points to them as a genre who required more time to raise an infant to levels of fertility. In short they most likely died out for two reasons; intercourse with Homo-sapiens, and lower birth rates. I'm Caucasian, and I feel kind of good about the idea that I have a little Neanderthal in me, they have been so misunderstood.

Thanks for the offering.

It is a sweet story and that makes a change. While the sexual content is low it does create a certain sexual tension and you aren't sure they would end up together so a bit of suspense!...

Nicely put together. Though I do not understand why the wife had to behave in a slutty manner. (Improved her self Image?) Still this form of a tragedy in its various denouements exists.

A good story, but wrong category.

Should have been in either "Mature", or even better "Romance".

I still gave it a 5* 'cause it was a sweet story.