All Comments on 'Alyssa's Birthday'

Very good flow of the story, not a lot of meaningless build up. yet to the point and with good execution. Looking forward to more tales of this brother and sister!

So few out there that are good, and have a real point to them.

The drawn out stories are boring, yours, got me interested quick.

You need to write more.

please write more tales of this sexy sibling duo.

if i had a sister who was willing, i would have fucked her at every opportunity. the only reason not to is to be sure no chjildren come out of the relationship. certainly no warning in any out of date scince fiction yarb should stop two people who really understand eack other.

she sounds like a sweet lookin' girl. keep going!!

enjoyed your story - keep telling us more about this

Wonderful

huge turn off 1 star

This story "hits the spot" for many of us readers...lots of us think about our siblings like this, it just never comes to fruition because of the fear of being caught/being ostracized by family, friends, and society as a whole. mY sister...yeah, I would have...😉...for sure!!

Another chapter to go with this would be nice!!

Five**5**Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠