by BreakTheBar
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Love the series, but for the last 2 installments you've been flip-flopping on first and second person for the narrator
I’m loving this story and how your not rushing things. Taking time to develope characters and the storyline please keep this up.
"I'm sorry you were offended, I was only trying to encourage you to feel free with your body.
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Funny, she isn't apologizing for the things she said or did only for the fact that Cass was offended. Meaning "sorry you were offended" not "sorry I offended you".
As always, a great read. Character development is good. Less whining about cheating. You did use you/your a couple of times when it should have been my. A little distracting for a moment, anal picky bs on my part. Still, a lot of fun.
"She reached for your cock again and you stopped her."
Random second person during the Becca part