by Dr Kink
You've done a remarkable job of showing how people can love each other..I hope you don't ever stop..
It's as if you late in the writing that you needed to add some balance. Also, the fact that suddenly we find out that her mother taught her how to kiss and masturbate makes her surprise at her parent's sexual past unbelievable.
This has everything from great sex to an easy to read and logical storyline. I am really enjoying the series.