by AnonymousPerv
This is scifi erotica done right - make the sex (no matter how unusual) part of the plot and use it to drive theaction. Five stars.
You are right to describe it as utter nonsense, but it's a real hoot! I'm glad you decided to publish it.
I agree with everything ZZchromosome said, too.
I love your writing and am always looking for your latest story.
I haven’t seen anything for a month. Are you doing alright?
What a great romp. I was giggling and stroking most of the time. You have a weird, twisted mind which should continue to write this stuff.
I couldn't find away to thwart the Gods. Therefore, you only got a 5 rating. Just keep writing this shit!