All Comments on 'Amanda and the B.O.D.'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Equal Parts Bizarre, Sexy, and Awesome

This is scifi erotica done right - make the sex (no matter how unusual) part of the plot and use it to drive theaction. Five stars.

lazy_readerlazy_readerover 5 years ago
Silly FUN

You are right to describe it as utter nonsense, but it's a real hoot! I'm glad you decided to publish it.

I agree with everything ZZchromosome said, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Miss seeing your work

I love your writing and am always looking for your latest story.

I haven’t seen anything for a month. Are you doing alright?

batman20003batman20003about 4 years ago
Funny

What a great romp. I was giggling and stroking most of the time. You have a weird, twisted mind which should continue to write this stuff.

I couldn't find away to thwart the Gods. Therefore, you only got a 5 rating. Just keep writing this shit!

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.