All Comments on 'Amanda Awakens Ch. 02 – After the Photoshoot'

What church do they attend where adultery, prostitution and more are allowed?

They don’t even feel a shred of guilt.

Especially bad to go from Non-con to the LW category. Readers here have little patience and this was poorly written. The unlikable characters and inane dialogue didn't help.

1 star

Why are you still writing? Just stop please. What you write is plain garbage

Ah okay so now the wife is a prostitute and her husband wants her to be a porn star. Its your fantasy/nightmare good luck.

Quite well written and believable. You are doing great with 62 followers after only 2 stories. I am not a big fan of short snippets like this and then no idea of when it might continue, would prefer the whole story at once. But, it is what it is and if I happen to catch the next installment I am sure I will enjoy.

Great story & looking forward to the next chapter. Please continue!

I'm reading Loving Wives, why would I want to read a 24.8K NC/R chapter one first? Pick a category and stick to it.

SCORE CHEAT ALERT

No way did the first of these earn over 4 in LW section

I wont be bothering with this racist shit any more

JJ

A brilliantly beautiful and erotic story told in a lovely narrative style

Great story and love to see where this goes? does she become the pornstar and will the community find out? how will affect their marriage etc. look forward to the next installment.

Should have stayed in the fringe NC category, this is not a LW story.

I am enjoying it, but seriously how many times do you have to mention that she has all natural 36DD breast? And this is coming from a tits guy. Tell us once or twice not 10 times each chapter, please

Interesting story. Enjoyed it. Please give us another chapter.

Excellent! Shows great promise! Continue please.

Does Amanda have a stutter or id see retarded? What on earth is wrong with her speech?

Really looking forward to the next part! I hope they use more of that drug that worked so well the first time.

fantastic, I just wish I could write that well. i want more.

naughty author...bad bad bad author... you should be forced to sit in a chair and watch the depraved and wicked acts you describe so artfully...can I come too🤣

Wow, great story, both part 1 and 2 were very good. Your 2 characters were well done and I would enjoy reading more stories in this line.. Thank u for sharing..

Although this was a lot shorter and thus simpler than part 1 it was still very enjoyable. Thank you

Enjoyed where it headed, hope there will be more :).

Sorry I read it... 1 star.

@sbrooks103x

I'm reading Loving Wives, why would I want to read a 24.8K NC/R chapter one first? Pick a category and stick to it.

Just because you want everything YOUR way doesn't give you the right to tell an author what to do with his/her stories.

oh right, we get it. 36DD tits. And they're amazing. Yawn

Very hot. The imagery was great. When do we get the rest of the story. Does Amanda become a porn star?

Fantastic

Is there more to follow?

Love this story. Very well written. Please continue this. I'd eager to know if Amanda goes to her dinner meeting and what happens

part 3 please