All Comments on 'Amanda Likes Japanese Girls Pt. 04'

Friendly word of advice for a story centered around two girls, not guys and girls, and their adventures together, don't do a scene like that again. It felt wrong. And Hina is being painted as a total slut for thinking of sleeping with anyone that's attractive without realizing it herself. Keep it girl-on-girl.

Part 04 was not really a Lesbian Romance Story, and probably should have been in a "First Time Section". Heterosexual stories are okay, however mostly should not be posted in the Lesbian section. This Pt. 04 changed the direction of Amanda Likes Japanese Girls, which really reduces the uniqueness of chapters 01-03.

Hina tells Amanda that she loves her, then cheats with Amanda's brother 4 or 5 hours later. Not something a really nice person would do to someone whom has been so nice to her as Amanda has.

This is your story to write, and my comments are intended to be helpful for your future Lesbian stories!! However, I no longer am interested in reading more of Amanda Like Japanese Girls!!

Неожиданно. Конечно к лесбиянкам это не относится. Но есть некая интрига. Посмотрим, что же будет дальше