All Comments on 'Amanda's Awakening Ch. 04'

Great story. Whrn does she get together with Jolene?

This was a really erotic story (and I loved the fantasy aspect!) until the 5th last paragraph. You worked your audience up to the main course, but served it hurriedly.

Can you edit the story to be more descriptive of the actual group sex part?

More, please? Amanda is really getting to be a fun young woman and it would be great reading about new adventures with her having sex in every way possible with new lovers (and the old ones too, of course). And the next time - fuck the pizza guy.

nice romantic story with sosme great Relative interaction. 5 stars

Great story! Since you’re still writing in 2023, please write more chapters about Amanda’s continuing awakening and experiences. You’ve written her as one of the hottest, most fun sexy women in Literotica. So, more orgies, fun with the family (add in Larry and Art’s dad?) and hot one on ones with new friends both male and female. Great series.

Yes! More Amanda, please!