All Comments on 'Amanda's Supplier Fuck'

I thought the end was rushed. And the language a bit too Tarantino for me. In fact, even with the language, you had your 5 in the bag. But the ending was unsatisfying. The story had been quite clever up till then. I was hoping for some sort of twist; or that her boss would have said, "5%!!!", and fainted or something.

Anyway, it's a good first up story :-)

SN

I liked the story, but then I love it every time that there is a multiple partner thing going on! But I would have waited till she went back to work, in front of her co-workers to put the boss in his place.

Anyway, great story! (And you can't please everyone all the time)!!!!

hotty hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A nice little story, very well written and a good premise!