All Comments on 'Amareth Falls'

The world that you have developed is very detailed. I hope that means that there are more parts to the story. Regardless, great job! Thanks for sharing your hard work!

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syrynsmyth

the more I read the more I become numb to the introduction of "technologies". Most of the plot development is based off on some strange made up scientific, pardon my french, bullshit. I know the setting is some advanced future society, but you should try sticking to the average tech everyone knows, and then expand more on that.

Overall not bad of a first story, I hope to see more interactions between the characters.

Very innovative, but I would tag it as horror more than Scifi. It is also very disconcerting to the point that though intrigued, I have no desire to continue with the series.