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by TheRedChamber

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JuanaSalsaJuanaSalsaalmost 2 years ago

Did not recognize title/blurb, lived the story anyway!

warelliswarellisalmost 2 years ago

Nice. :D Will there be mkre to this? Like the MC finds Gwynevere's chest for real? :D

yowseryowseralmost 2 years ago

Clever

Don't get the allusion, but something different. The second person address and overuse of the definite article (the breasts, the tongue) detract, but otherwise nicely told.

DevinterDevinter5 months ago

Extremely creepy. But I believe that is what you were going for! More horror than erotic horror - but certainly original. Was certainly expecting more Gwynevere and "Try Thrusting" messages than gaping horrors and imminent death, but it's Dark Souls, so expecting anything other than misery was foolish of me!

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