All Comments on 'Amazing Grace Ch. 01-02'

This was really. Good cant wait for more

Please bring us more of this marvellous story - and thank you for sharing it with us.

More of this story please!

now lets have more of the story. All stories are not about the sex, but the good ones have development and character development like yours. I can't wait.

Great start can't wait for the next chapter thanks for sharing.

I'm sitting here crying and I don't cry pretty. 14 years without my man and no Ethan to be found. At least I didn't find out about some one else after he was gone. Just gone is hard enough.

Your characters are so very real. The conversations are real. The emotions are real. I like the pace you have set so far.

Once again, you've hooked me with great characters and wonderful dialog and writing

I'm a big fan, have all three of your published books. Particularly loved "Melange." Can't wait to dive into the next chapters of this story. I'm starting late because I didn't make the connection between your Literotica persona, D Lynn, and your publishing name, Dakota Lynn. Ten lashes for me!

The more I read of your writing the more I like reading it very nice.

WOW - a author who can really write - grin. Thanks. Looking foreword the next chapter.

For a second I forgot I was read a free story!! It drew me in so completely! Bravo!

Love what I'm reading so far..

This is written on a much higher plane than most here. The craftsmanship is evident from the first paragraph. Although this is not a genre that I normally read I find this to be very interesting and intriguing. Your characters are very interesting and the development of them is excellent. Great work. 5*

Please write more. I've been through something like this. I need to know how he responds. I need to know how she gets through it, if she gets through it. I need to know where their relationship goes. I need to know how she gets on with her life. This was very powerful and exceptionally written. Please don't stop here.

Perfect introduction. Sadly relatable... Thank you for the free shrink consultation and let's go to the next part. :-P