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He was so right it scared me. I nodded my assent but it felt more like a surrender.
"He didn't leave you on purpose. I'm sure he'd rather be sitting here in my chair if he could."
Of course he didn't die on purpose. I needed to set him straight. The last thing I wanted was for Ethan to think I was a nut case.
"It wasn't him. Not his death, anyway.
"And you're wrong about him wanting to sit in that chair if he were here. He'd only want to sit there if she were sitting here. Not me."
- COMMENTS
TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years agoPerfect introduction. Sadly relatable... Thank you for the free shrink consultation and let's go to the next part. :-P
Anonymousabout 8 years agoPlease write more. I've been through something like this. I need to know how he responds. I need to know how she gets through it, if she gets through it. I need to know where their relationship goes. I need to know how she gets on with her life. This was very powerful and exceptionally written. Please don't stop here.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis is written on a much higher plane than most here. The craftsmanship is evident from the first paragraph. Although this is not a genre that I normally read I find this to be very interesting and intriguing. Your characters are very interesting and the development of them is excellent. Great work. 5*
FrannySmurfalmost 9 years agoFor a second I forgot I was read a free story!! It drew me in so completely! Bravo!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoWOW - a author who can really write - grin. Thanks. Looking foreword the next chapter.
playman64almost 11 years agoThe more I read of your writing the more I like reading it very nice.
GimletEdgeabout 11 years agoI'm a big fan, have all three of your published books. Particularly loved "Melange." Can't wait to dive into the next chapters of this story. I'm starting late because I didn't make the connection between your Literotica persona, D Lynn, and your publishing name, Dakota Lynn. Ten lashes for me!
DarkerMuseabout 11 years agoOnce again, you've hooked me with great characters and wonderful dialog and writing
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI'm sitting here crying and I don't cry pretty. 14 years without my man and no Ethan to be found. At least I didn't find out about some one else after he was gone. Just gone is hard enough.
Your characters are so very real. The conversations are real. The emotions are real. I like the pace you have set so far.
