All Comments on 'Amazing Wedding Night'

Unique. I like it. Too much focus on consent though

Written in a completely different style, this story is well done- as far as it goes. However, it is simply too short, and does not take enough time to establish the setting or introduce the characters. The love scene is also much too brief, and this is disappointing when an author writes as well as zachattack163. Another such story, more extensive, and perhaps written from the female POV, would certainly be welcomed.

To the anonymous user who posted yesterday. Thank you so much for this comment and all of the other comments you posted on all of my other stories. I really appreciate your feedback and I wanted you to know that I am working on some other stories. I hope you enjoy reading my future stories.