All Comments on 'Amber's Enslavement Ch. 01'

Interesting so far. I'll definitely look for a next chapter to see where this leads.

Will be waiting for more chapters to this storyline. Left wanting more! Thank you.

The start of another good story, I will be looking for more.

I like the magic. A fun way to get around awkwardness and it leaves the door open for infinite possibilities. I am looking forward to meeting more of the characters. This sounds like fun. xantu

Seductively written, I'll give you that. But whats this fixation with slavery? A willing partner with her/his OWN mind is SO much better. It's disgusting to pretend that negating someones sentience is in any way acceptable.

knowing it had slavery in it???????? I mean WTF are you that fucking dumb? Plus Ass w/o a name it's only a story. Wake the fuck UP!

Really good start! I wil read the next chapter soon! I loved it!

From this first chapter it looks as though this is going to be a really good read. A little more characterization and Amber's emotions would be good, but it is still early in the story.

for your wonderful imagination!!! Only 4 stars as the delivery is a bit stiff--doesn't quite flow.

I think you misunderstood what the comment you complained about was saying. It’s an intellectual statement.

SLAVERY IS WRONG. If someone freely chooses to submit as a slave it’s another matter entirely. It’s obvious that these people understand that slavery is wrong because it is only applicable to aliens, quite literally those not born on the home world. If they truly believed that there was nothing wrong with slavery then a slave’s planet of origin would be irrelevant. The society in question does not support free will as evidenced by the statement on suicide.

Human Trafficking or Modern Slavery IS a real issue here and now, so despite the fact that the story is an obvious fantasy some people have problems separating the issues. Some times it really bugs me too and sometimes I can ignore it.

An option of slavery or death isn’t an option and to claim that a magical or technological device can determine true intent is absolute bollocks? Intent and desire can vary on a minute to minute basis, subject to a vast range of external factors Personally I found it hard to read without thinking about the Eddie Izzard sketch ‘Cake or Death’.

If the choice was slavery or freedom the answers would be very different. The story claims it’s a choice, what would your answer be? Not that it would matter because they could easily claim that device shows your true choice = the opposite of what you stated. People are more than their sexual fantasies, their libido might spark at sexual slavery but the mind is usually the stronger influence.

Therefore the reality in this instance is that its brainwashing/ conditioning/ grooming (of which the last is a horrendous trigger word for me), in doing all of these things you loose the individuality of the person literally destroying their minds, suddenly everyone is a pain slut? Uh, no not really. By the end of the process I expect that most of them are compliant slaves.

The story is interesting from an intellectual point of view, I hope those who choose to read it enjoy it. I certainly enjoyed aspects of it. It’s a difficult topic to write about and I certainly appreciate that you’ve done so as a fantasy - in this case fantasy being defined as sci-fi.