All Comments on 'Amber's Gangbang'

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Dr beulahthemick; Amber is one very lucky girl, well fucked in all of her holes, plenty of cum to swallow, then a loving fuck to finish. Next time though she must insist on a double-vaginal, that is the ultimate in my opinion, two cocks pounding your pussy and flooding you with cum. I leaked for what seemed like days.

Fetish, not LW, ugh.

This is fucked up. Watching your wife/girlfriend get banged and then eat her out? That's sick.

Wow. What a guy, what a wonderful husband, couldn't wait to watch his wife get gangbanged. How utterly stupid. This doesn't even deserve one star, but there's nothing lower. You had one chance to make a good first impression, you certainly fucked that up.

This is why I love newbies they always want to put there stories in the wrong category . Right let’s get to the point a normal story you base your stories on the characters which is the normal thing. On this site it works different than you think your story is based on group sexual orientation. Aka you wrote about how you had sexual things in a group. Basically what I’m saying is forget about the characters you use it’s what the characters do . Aka you forget they are a husband and wife you must think about just a plain male and a plain female and what they get into. Aka in your story it was group sex . That is why there are category’s on this site so now you have posted it in the wrong category it’s classed as pointless just think about it next time.

Wrong category. Not about a wife at all.

You're in the wrong category with a stupid, badly thought out story. What did this story have to do with Loving Wives?

1st story and it clearly exposes this writer as A) a retread with a new pen name and B) he also has an immense amount of homosexual repression going on.

Im sure under one of your other pen names I mentioned you getting therapy for your immense mental illness issues so let me reiterate that......get some professional help.

Solid story, could use a little more background to the story

What a stupid story.

Aww are y'all mad :( don't read if you don't like

A complete ordure! 1* (Where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Hey shouldn't all strong and hopeful relationships begin with a good old fashion gang bang? I mean cum on people a future husband really should know how his future wife fucks and sucks cock.....right?

Hey it's your 1st, keep trying you'll get better. 3 stars for a good effort. You wrote a pretty good stoke story. I'm sure some idiot will analyze it for social redeeming qualities!

Yes please eat her out n enjoy her more....she will cum n flood your mouth too...

No one mad author, just laughing at an idiot who thought this mess was fit to post.

Maybe not the best written piece, but ignore the critics. This is one my wife and I's favorite fantasies and we love this story. This exact scenario is on our bucket list.