All Comments on 'Amber's Propersition'

Considering that you said that this was a re-write I dread to think what the spelling was like in the original. Start with the title. I assume it should say proposition.

Arraigned instead of arranged. Reviled instead of revelled, etc.

It ruined a good story.

Despite the poor spelling, lack of proper punctuation and inconsistent sitauctions (twice standing without rising) I went five ( 5 ) .

With Proof Reading this would be fully exquisite.

We all have a niece or two . . .

Very Good. Really enjoyed it.

I just had to read this. "How bad could it be" I joked to myself.

I'm no longer laughing.