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by LenNeal

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BigBlackDCBigBlackDCover 13 years ago
AWESOME READ

I've read a few of your posts and have to admit-you are an awesome writer. the builid up of this story and the ultimate resolution were very well thought out. I was very very pleased with how you ended this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good tight writing

Very nice. The tension is never broken. I get this guy.

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