All Comments on 'Amelia Jones Ch. 01'

by soppingwetpanties

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joefeltonjoefeltonabout 4 years ago
An excellent start

Hi Swp,

Please continue with this story. I feel like I could be Todd. Btw, you're a really good writer. The pacing was perfect, and some of it was really funny.

Five *s

justwarped2018justwarped2018about 4 years ago

awesome start love to read more

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 4 years ago
Lovely Start

Want to see what happens from here, remember slow and passionate sex is the best!

xoxo,

Di

seanbiasseanbiasabout 3 years ago

Oh I can't wait to read CH2.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years ago

Mmmm..Muriel and Todd should explore more of his desires....

journeyofselfjourneyofselfover 1 year ago

Thank you! I just discovered your writing, I enjoyed it a lot, have an erection and will cum all over myself. AMELIA JONES CH. 01

smooth_Ballssmooth_Balls10 months ago

I'd love to read more of them but 3 years later chances for a 2nd chapter are low. Muriel might discover how powerful it makes her feel as she 'forces' her partner to more and more become what he secretly desires to be. Just on weekends at first, then whenever they are alone at the house:

a bit of dressing and a lot of role change.

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