All Comments on 'Amelia's Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
GREAT HOT WIFE

Love to have my wife use me this way. Collar ,restraints,chastity, butt plug, strap on, would love them all. Eating my creampie and any others both hers and any of her friends . YUM YUM YUM

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
my god

what a hot story and lucky man,id give anything if my wife was like that

JohnnyRottencrotchJohnnyRottencrotchover 6 years ago
Enjoyed the Power Trip!

This was a very enjoyable story! I like where it led and its conclusion. She's not only discovered a side to her hubby, but a side to herself. Great story!

As for the anonymous twit with the thumbs down review... Fuck'em. Anonymous opinions don't matter. Keep on writing!

44chicken44chickenover 6 years ago
Yum!

Great story. Well written. I hope there are more chapters coming!

EmirusEmirusabout 6 years ago
A fortunate man

Great story. A very fortunate and happy man (at the moment) because he got what he wished for which doesn’t happen to many people. It reminded me very much of one of my role play sessions with a lady of ill repute. Whether it’s a stand alone story or you intend to write a sequel it was still a very enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting premise.

OK beginning. But when it got to the sex, it was much too rushed. Needed many more details. Needed dialog about what was going on between them. How did he think he could please her? Did she agree? Did she give him instructions as to what to do with his lips? His tongue? Did she tell him where to do what? Faster? Slower? Was he enjoying himself?

Three stars.

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