All Comments on 'American Dream / Nightmare'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love the plot twist

The plot twist at the end, it being her husband, added a great depth to the story. As a girl that enjoys anal, I also appreciated this aspect of the story. Great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This was a great story, loved the twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The concept is good, but the way the two interact is bizarrely humorous. Back to the drawing board to make this story even marginally believable!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

this was great

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