All Comments on 'Amid The Shadows Ch. 04'

I am enjoying the story. You are building momentum and creating lots of questions I'd like answered. I think it might have been a tad more effective to put the part where Alexis goes into the trance and speaks to her brother after we read about the brother's attempt to contact her. It would have flowed better. just a small thing.

I think you may have an interesting story to tell, but the poor editing is really hiding it. I am still trying to persevere, but you make really tough reading and it is a shame. Lynn