All Comments on 'Amish No More Ch. 05'

This story was great, but frankly, this chapter was awful. You got Martha and Mandy mixed up several times and your tenses and verbs were mixed up. On top of that, Martha seems stupid. You are a better writer than this.

Like most that visit Literotica, I came here to rub a quick one off. As background, I've visited the site for 6-7 years and find it useful for intellectual "stress relief". While surfing new submissions I came across chapter 5, and, as usual I clicked on author and started with chapter 1. A few paragraphs into it I realized that I had previously started to read it, but this time I continued through to the end. I then read all of the remaining chapters.

Yes, you did have some grammatical errors and yes they should be addressed. However, its been 3+ hours and I still haven't pleasured myself. THATS how good the story is. Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to Chapter 6

I have been following this story since the first chapter was published! I would love to see more chapters please!

A BRILLIANT story!!

Hopefully more chapter's to come. Only half way through thr story.

I sure hope you finish the story and not leave us hanging like a lot of others have

Awesome story can't wait for more

Was good but didnt get a ending as I was hoping for just diasappointed

just brilliant. how on earth you keep track of everyone is impressive. So many characters. Possibly a little gentle editing of the text would help the story flow without interuption. Overall, a tour de force. Congratulations.