by Ambidentrous
Good, but not as good as the first chapter, looking forward to #3
Enjoyed it very much. Always interesting and original scenarios in your stories. Looking forward to see where you take this. Wherever it is, I'm sure it will be a surprise.
I never thought such stories can be so erotic....
i am so damn waiting for the next part...
Please make it fast,,,,
Just wonderful. There is a lot that is amazing about this story. I haven't read your earlier series--I can't wait! Thank you so much.
You let us wait for quit some time before you posted part two, it was worth waiting. Hope to wait a little less this time.
A.
You are a very funny writer. I was in stitches towards the end--in a very good way. I also had a hardon that could break through a wall. As we say on the interwebz, m0@r plz!! ^^
I didn't know whether to laugh or cum! The descriptions were so hot and so ... honest in their emotional touch I could practically hear the dialogue. Also, thank you for not letting the scene with Emily degenerate into a threesome. Not that there's anything wromg with threesomes, but it would have felt completely wrong in that comtext. Two virgins and a roomate the guy just met? It would have taken me right out of my acceptance of the conceit of the situation.
Well written! Thanks for writing & sharing with us!
The scene with the BJ under the table is great; fun how you involved all three of them in the action. Descriptions were excellent!
I'm off to read Ch. 3 now!