All Comments on 'Amnesty Program Ch. 02'

Good premise.

Sex, however, manages to be boooooring.

Three stars.

Well written! Thanks for writing & sharing with us!

The scene with the BJ under the table is great; fun how you involved all three of them in the action. Descriptions were excellent!

I'm off to read Ch. 3 now!

You need to make a sixth one!!!!!

I LOVE IT!! Kim in Kansas

I didn't know whether to laugh or cum! The descriptions were so hot and so ... honest in their emotional touch I could practically hear the dialogue. Also, thank you for not letting the scene with Emily degenerate into a threesome. Not that there's anything wromg with threesomes, but it would have felt completely wrong in that comtext. Two virgins and a roomate the guy just met? It would have taken me right out of my acceptance of the conceit of the situation.

You are a very funny writer. I was in stitches towards the end--in a very good way. I also had a hardon that could break through a wall. As we say on the interwebz, m0@r plz!! ^^

You let us wait for quit some time before you posted part two, it was worth waiting. Hope to wait a little less this time.

A.

Just wonderful. There is a lot that is amazing about this story. I haven't read your earlier series--I can't wait! Thank you so much.

I never thought such stories can be so erotic....

i am so damn waiting for the next part...

Please make it fast,,,,

Looking forward to chapter three.

Enjoyed it very much. Always interesting and original scenarios in your stories. Looking forward to see where you take this. Wherever it is, I'm sure it will be a surprise.

keep on writing! i can't wait for the next chapter

Good, but not as good as the first chapter, looking forward to #3