All Comments on 'Amorous Family Camping Trip'

Jeez. Where to start. Not horrible but you dearly need an Editor. Incorrect word usage is #1 on the list. I'd didn't FAZE her. Not phase. What's Val mean by While? Page 5 and he's still thinking how wrong fucking them is? Not worth rating.

Looking forward to their new home life with mom. 😈

hope you add more

Very erotic

Great story, really enjoyed reading it!

forget the critics...it was a great story.

I, too, do not understand your use of “While?”. When I substitute “Well?” It is better.

When they get home, mother starts to question them and want Sam’s bag cock now that she had heard the girls stories.

Mother tells her sister about the kids weekend and she wants / needs the big cock also.

Sam becomes the “stud” of the family and enjoys it.

Love the story

Very erratic or do I mean erotic? While, only time will tell.

I hope yor working on a part two.

Like the story but could use an editor, but let's be real we are not reading these stories looking for the next Hemingway.

Hope they keep their fucking going.

Absolutely great! So erotic and not distasteful at all.

Ignore the previous comment. This is a great story. Keep writing.

Very hot. Please write more.

Mom should've been also part of this

Loved it.

I too, hope for mom's involvement in future chapters. :)

I agree with Manogamous, It would be good for both mother and son, with the daughter and cousin joining in.... Leep up the good work. Paul G.

Awesome!

During the day they are still deeply ashamed to have seen each other naked, but in the evening they already jerk off together.

Stopped reading there.

Agree with first Anonymous that you need aneditor or someone to review your stories but to say not worth rating is extremely harsh. There's an excellent story there and worth taking forward. 5 from me.

Great cousin sister brother story, I found it very HOT. Ya have your hot tatooed cousin, and your virgin sister. Then there's your basic nice guy big brother, what's not to like? 5 ***** for this reader.

Mean while back home; Billy Bob, or BeBe for short, stops by to shoot hoops, but with Sam not there he ends up splitting Beers with Hot Mom, they end up fucking the Beejesus out of each other all weekend, seems Mom hasn't been laid in a long time But that's another story. LOL

Hope 3 girls (MOM, SISTER and COUSIN) joins and need more passionate. In incest love it's all about bond. They can't be separated. Because all are in blood. But please don't ruin in this by joining more male attendance. Sam is enough.

very very hot story absolutely loved it

It was so good that 5stars were worth your effort! But, if a non-native English speaker, like me, can spot so many mistakes, the need for an editor is crucial! Keep working and proofread more on your way to excellence.

We loved it! Thank you for submitting such an erotic story!

WAUW !

Fantastic! Until the story quit so soon.

Finish the story, damnit,

Bill S.

It was really good kept me interested

5/5. I would love a part 2 but it's just as good without it. Thank you author

Nato_

Well written and a real turn-on! Highly erotic and extremely arousing!

you are indeed a good story teller.. thanks

Get a proofreader

You sometimes mix the characters up, but who cares? Family fucking is fun!

liked them...

PS ...but still two more holes for him to explore...

Now that’s a story! 😍

Once it got going, it is one of the better ones I have read.

Great story family fun is always the best. My sister gives me the most fantastic blow jobs I ever had. Brother Bill