by marx810
Damn it, that was as close as perfection as you could get.
The sexual side ? Top notch. The prose ? Captivating. The dialogs ? Life-like.
One of the best incest stories I have ever read, congratulations !
i love those kind mystery box or book sex lots of sex with family members daughters and wife with son.S4TEL
I have never commented on a story on this site, but time and time again your stories never fail to impress me. Over the last few weeks it feels like I've been traversing a desert, trying to find the next juicy story and you delivered me an oasis.
This was really good however for me personally it got to be confusing between the demon and daughters voices, characters, etc....and that took away some of the enjoyment.
Very creative, unique, and hot. Though, still can't figure out if I liked it or not . However, thanks for this story. 4.5
Great story, loved the interplay between Depravity and Grace as well as that with Eddie. Couldn't be better. Would be interesting to see how it all panned out in the future for them. Peraps partners for both of them and Depravity flitting between them causing all types of mischief.
Nice, long, drawn out story. Unrushed, great characters. Loved every minute of it. A story in long form that kept me interested and not just a story that dragged out for no reason (a true feat here on Lit). 5 stars. Here's to hoping you can do it again.
Fucking A, this is definitely the best story I've ever read on here to date. 5 stars isn't enough.
I AM HALF WAY THROUGH AND I JUST HAVE TO SAY YOU ARE FUCKING GREAT. PLEASE DO NOT STOP WRITING I FUCKING LOVE YOU. YOU FILLED ME WITH SO MUCH PLEASURE FROM THIS STORY, I AM DROOLING AND LEAKING
This reminds me of Spellbound by lovecraft68, but F/D instead of M/S. Both are in my top 10. Anybody know of any similar stories?
This works great as Story, which is rare feat here on Lit. I was not as horny as I really enjoyed the plot and the way you made it work. 5 stars seem like too few.
IVE BEEN TRYING TO FIND THIS STORY FOR MONTHS, A YEAR PERHAPS. one of the best, one of my favorite. Wow.