All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: The Box'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
really fanciful

Interesting and creative.

It always struck me that much of the payoff of exhibitionism seemed to be in the embarrassment, the stress - to do it or not - of possibly having to deal with observers, the taboo-ness of it all. That generates the excitement and so the physical/emotional reward of having the courage and taking the chance. In this, there was no more "benefit" to the exhibitionism than enjoying the air on their skin, because nobody really seemed to care.

Still creative.

zooliciouszooliciousover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you. I’m still exploring my writing style and how to express feeling on paper. I’ll keep your comment in mind as I write more.

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