All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: Vikki's Turn'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good but confusing in places as to what sex they were at that time

Saphic_succubusSaphic_succubusover 2 years ago

Not bad, but it could use some more suspense, maybe a bigger build up.

Eros_PrismEros_Prismover 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this! Lots of fun and quite hot. Great job!

joeschlageljoeschlagelabout 2 years ago

Very good story. I would like to see more body transformation, make it more descriptive, and maybe used as punishment or reward, keep them same sex, make physical improvements along with the mental changes.

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