All Comments on 'Amusing Train Ride'

by Matadore

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wonderful blurr of time and space . . .

About the time I was beginning to ponder a question as to where and when this story was taking place, my mind - and body - were caught up in an exquisite sensual episode. Time and place were no longer relevant. What an incredible talent to be able to so effortlessly transend such basic constaints.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very imaginative indeed

i really enjoyed this one...so erotic yet innocent i loved it....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your story was

very sensually and erotically written, a treat for the senses. I had a problem with sunlight and tang but that's my own personal thing. Great job.

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