All Comments on 'Amy Ch. 01'

Well done!

Read 2 than this one it's good would love to read 3 and 4 and see where it goes and some of her motivation is she looking for an older man to marry or just sleep around does the sister make a play

One of the things I like in a good story is plausibility. This isn’t. The dialog doesn’t fit. A 4 is charitable.

Well done again, Notorius!!! You do a very good job detailing the subtle, sexual nuances of a woman. Regarding the comment below on plausibility, having been around the block a time, or two, anything is plausible, given the right mix of time, circumstance, and opportunity... Add a hard dick, and some teenage want-to, and BOOM, Anything can happen!! I'm going in for Amy, chapter 2, right now to see what else is plausible with this young lady.