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Click hereI was close, standing in the shower fully stroking my dick. I could see that face as if she was right in front of me.
Getting closer.
She'd start giving off a keening sound that was closer to a banshee's wail.
Closer.
Suddenly the face in my mind wasn't Grace. Suddenly for the first time in 30 years I was about to cum thinking of another woman.
The face I saw was Amy's. And I came with a force that I hadn't in three years. I came so hard that jets of cum coated the wall of the shower. Three, then four, the five ropes shot from my dick coating the tile.
I sat down hard in the shower because I was suddenly dizzy. Dizzy from the sensation and dizzy from shame.
Jesus Fucking Christ what the fuck was wrong with me? I came thinking about a woman is in all likelihood my sister.
- COMMENTS
202GE8 months agoThe premise is good and the writing very good for a beginner but the back story meanders. You provide your audience all the information you want them to know but as a writer there could be a lot more focus on what is shared. 4/5
ScottishTexan10 months agoI had to revisit this from the beginning and read it all the way through now that you have newer stuff added on to it. I was recently editing one of my own stories and I had mentioned my own sister who died 36 hours after her birth in the preface of my story. Then I read what you wrote:
"Amy had asked me if I ever felt as if there was something missing. The truth of the matter was that I thought that nearly every single day of my life. Even when Grace was alive and I was as close to happy as someone like me could ever be I felt like there was a big fucking hole inside me. I never understood it...."
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Okay, so yeah. Me too! I found out about my sister because I was 4 years old and I had that same feeling of "Something missing". I looked outside of my family where I was an only child and realized that all of my friends had sisters and brothers but I had no one. I complained about it to my parents several times until they finally broke down and revealed that my sister was a premie and she didn't make it. She would have been 8 when I was 4.
I have lived with a huge hole in my life where my sister should have been. Luckily, I gained some extended family when my father remarried. My Stepsister is 5 years younger than me and we're kinda close. I'm probably more attached to her than she is to me, but I she does give me the three little words without me having to say it first, so that means a lot! I'm still a fan and your story is still 5/5.
Lee201211 months agoSurely you’re NOT a programmer! But then, the humor and anger (borderline rage) are present. I say this as a Software Engineer, neigh Systems Analyst, neigh Developer and former Programmer (through 40+ years). The line just before “Zoom session” with your brothers.
Minor spelling errors, typical of a programmer, but helluva story. Moving on to the next
ScottishTexan11 months agoHow refreshing to FINALLY come across a really good quality story for a change! Recently, a lot of the newer incest stories have either childish, something written for jerking off, or both. 🤔 I admit that there have been a couple of good quality stories, but fewer than the fingers on just one hand.
If this is your first effort, then well done! I'm fully invested in your tale and I want to keep reading! 5/5
