All Comments on 'Amy Makes a New Life'

What a beautiful story. There was lots of sex but it was almost incidental to the love showing through ... and the cricket just made it perfect.

( Pwayman )

Great story and an amazing follow-up to the story of Amy and Dee.

Wonderfully romantic, poignant and erotic - you craft beautiful, memorable stories. Thanks for sharing.

The tragic opening to the story was a bit of a gripper but following that it turned into a delightful romance with an interesting cast of characters. It's been a pleasure watching you develop as a writer, Sandy, from the first Milly Scott tale through to this one. More power to your imagination!

Seemed to be an overabundance of commas in some spots, and some other small things as well. But by the time theend got here I felt as though I was in the box celebrating with the rest of the lot. Thank you for the storytelling and craft in this, is is a wonderful story and a fitting followup to the original.

That was wonderfully written Sandy_paris I have written before about your stories and you are a fantastic writer and this one is very loving and happy story, I hope you will write more about these people and whether they do get married as they are very much in love and they deserve each other I was more interested in the storyline than the sex which is part of two people who love as deeply as they do thank you more soon please. xxx

Fabulous story!

What an amazing story. To go from tears of sadness to tears of joy. Thank you again for writing and sharing your stories with us. 5 starts and another favorited story.

I love it. It was nice to see Amy find happiness again after Dee. Thank for a wonderful story.

Sandy It took me most of page two to snap me out of my funk that set in when Dee passed away. It was tough to follow Amy through her grief but gradually step by step you let her heal. Then she met Meredith and Sarah and her life steadily improved while her pain diminished. I like how you let Amy have her Dee moments throughout the story. When Meredith’s mother acknowledged that Dee touched her families lives through Amy the story felt complete. It will be fun to see how you follow up with Sarah and her friends. Thank you.

Wow … just wow .. what a great story. The only thing is I wish I knew more about cricket so I could understand what was happening in that match. It made my head spin. But what a well written story. You developed all the characters and there was so much love and emotion .. which to me is more important than the sex (but that was pretty hot too) what a way to spend an evening .. I’m sorry it’s finished. Thanks again … ❤️❤️

Just sorry I can’t give it 10 stars.

VERY WELL DONE LOOKING FORWARD TO MANY MORE A FAN SHAYNE

i can safely say that no other story i have read on this platform came even close to moving me in the way that this beautiful, sensitive, and wonderfully penned love ballad has.

i doff my hat to you.

xoxo

A very enjoyable read, well crafted and entertaining. It may have been a work of fiction but I confess that my eyes were moist during the cricket match. I will look forward to following Sarah's future with interest, both as a cricketer and a woman. Hopefully it will turn out that her taste in sex will mirror her mother.

Great story, we executed and kept me gripped, thank you

No hankies, I enjoyed the free flow of tears as I read this beautiful story. It's (too) late and I just couldn't stop reading, breathtaking as a thriller. My heart was warmed.

Such a beautiful story.

So beautiful that I enjoyed the cricket commentary without a clue as to how its played.

Well done and thank you.

All smiles from Nairobi :)

Sandy is such a beautirul writer the whole story kept me rivetted as I could feel the love that slowly developped between her and Dee and after with Merdith and Sasha.

Hope Sandy writes more like this one.

Joanne

XO

Excellent story. You are one fine writer. Thank you for your effort and the end result was greatly appreciated by all your fans.

Thought Amy and Dee's story couldn't be bettered and I was correct for this first 2 pages of this then it kicked in and, boy ( or girl!!) did you succeed. On reflection, the beginning was about Dee's death and the intense grief felt but as Amy moved on the pace and story intensified. Great writing and storytelling.

Seemed to be a couple of words omitted and / or other errors but nothing significant.

Definite 5 stars.

Once again I enjoyed your story and will be waiting for further developments.

An Absolutely Moving Love Story!

Just a wonderful love story from Sandy P, especially including Sarah's adoring love for Amy. I certainly feel that Amy's influence was a major catalyst in Sarah's success in Cricket.

I was also quite happy in seeing Amy surrounded by people who loved and respected her🎉. This was just an all around awesome multifaceted love story.

Definitely Another 5*-Star Performance!

Wow, what a great story. The lead in describing Amy's grief over her wife's death gives the story a platform to build from as she slowly discovers that life goes on and builds a new one that brings her great happiness and a new family. Your skills as a writer improve with each new story and you build a credibility around your characters. Really enjoyed reading this but it was in the Christmas Day scene you got me right between the eyes with the Glengoyne! While the story is a work of fiction the Glengoyne distillery is very real and your discription of it is spot on (follow the A81 out of Glasgow towards Aberfoyle and you'll find it). I grew up near there so could instantly picture it and still refer to it as my local distillery despite living Down South now. You have made use of the Dear Green Place as a backdrop to previous stories so please continue to do so and include more of the fantastic countryside surrounding the city, you'll make this homesick Weegie very happy. Off for a wee hauf, slaithe!

I always felt like "Amy and Dee" was an unfinished work, and for me, "Amy Makes a New Life" completed the story in a beautifully life reaffirming way. I can't tell you how much I would like to see a Sarah and Hayley love story evolve out of this storyline. It seems like there is already a special connection between the two young ladies. A lesbian cricket power couple also strikes me as having a lot of potential for drama and adventure. Plus we could get more Amy and Meredith in the bargain. Yay!!! Thank you for your wonderful work Sandy, and thanks in advance for any future works.

simply - lovely

Extraordinary.

This was sensationell and sensuality oberload ......sooooo much happen so enchanting written , soooo hearttouching ....... All the events of five years packed smoothly in seven pages and there was no break or void in your tale, easy to follow and lovely to read ...... So warm and full of heart&soul ...... This chapter is awesome

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Really great story.

One of the best, IMHO.

I've not had tears three times in one story before.

Thank you for this...

Enjoyed the story but i did understand cricket

Great story and a more involving follow up to “Amy & Dee.” The family and Cricket aspects are winners, although I know most readers in the USA won’t understand the sporting references (Brits don’t get Baseball either btw), which does make a pleasant change around. Nice touch using Tomintoul, a decent Single Malt can be a wonderful thing to enjoy with friends or family.

Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz 5⭐️

Superb !

Just a very touching and delightful story.

I loved it !

Rapier

So very good!

Thank you!

Beautiful! Please! Never stop writing!

I am an American and I don't understand Cricket at all. I am a Baseball person and I don't attend any games in America. I am not a sports fanatic. I am a male that grew up with baseball. I used to play a lot, but that is a long time ago. Cricket is an English game and I don't understand it at all. I'm sorry about that!

You have a true gift. Your stories are about much more than the sex and the passion, while that is certainly there and important; they are about people learning how live with and truly love each other, shamelessly and unconditionally, while at the same time overcoming immeasurable sorrow over the loss of loved ones who were also truly loved, but in a different time and circumstance. I expect there are many readers who have had similar experiences of loving then needing to move on hoping to find that true love again. Your stories likely serve as a kind of literary catharsis for them, as the feelings and emotions come through clearly, both for individuals and between the characters. I had to use paper towels for the tears, as tissues would have been insufficient. Thank you for this lovely experience.