All Comments on 'Amy's Bachelorette'

Urgh what a horrible bunch of friends to have, no morals in any of them. Poor Danny getting dragged into their swinger shit. Wife will be ducking whoever like a horny dog, she’s already fucked his friends. Divorce is on the cards soon

Should be in group sex not much in the way of lovingbwifes, group of cheating slurs and their cuck hobbies.

Couldn't skip fast enough or far enough.

Umm…da’fuq did I just read?

it could have been shorter

sick no use reading just more sluts bullshit

Total garbage

Lol. I felt sorry for Amy's Fiance. He's going to marry a total slut who evidently couldn't care less about her relationship with him. What a bunch of manipulative, despicable sleazeballs. Hopefully, the strippers or the Uber driver had an STD, and they all caught it.

Lousy writer, lousy story. Nothing whatsoever redeemable about any of the characters. Thank god all I did was skim, even that was disgusting. I can't imagine how shitty your life must be to think garbage like this is entertainment.

As soon as I read no we sucked them off. I knew it was another cuck story. These stories need their own category or at the very least put them in the fetish section.

Yuck, hopefully ALL of them turn up HIV positive!

Beyond the infinity of boringness at the gates of stupidity it lays a pile of botched shit and on top you’ll find this drivel.

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You have a lot of good scoring LW stories and they are mostly recent, so I feel a little nit-picky making this comment, but here goes anyway: it’s way too darn long, has far too many characters for easy reading, and unless I’m all screwed up you had the bachelorette party for Amanda and yet Amanda seems to be married several places in the text.

Not one of your best efforts! cd

Poor excuse for a sex story.

Wrong category

way to long, how many times to repeat a sex scene. They better all get checked for STD. How many of these sluts could get pregnant. None of these people are worth a shit.

It could have been somewhere else.

It’s creative sexy you get a 5

But the character development is really poor - it’s about Amy but turns out to be about amanda and I still have no idea who the groom is - Danny?

I feel sorry for the unseen character, Amy's fiancee.

Uh-uh ugh!!!

Pretty sure you wanted that cum shot in your mouth closet boy.

That was one sadly pathetic story, even if it werent a gay mans wet dream, it was just as shitty as they come.

I do hope you arent planning on writing for a living, because, quite honestly, you should have paid literotica to post this skid mark of idiocy.

Look, you want to write a cuck story go right ahead

Just use the cuck tag, and assholes like me will skip the story and the one star fairy will pass you by

Trailer Trash lives on with this sick bunch. How anyone could class this as LW is beyond me. AWEFUL, and no I didnt read it all, it was pukesome

Please continue the story I liked it

Shiiiite didn't even bother to finish reading it after first paragraphs.. what a load of crap

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Anonymous, you do trailer trash a disservice with your comment. These characters don’t rise anywhere close to that level.

Amazing. Do you eat your own shit? I'm done reading your shit.

And it ended with out the sister taking Tom in her pussy and her sisters husband in the ass. That couldn't have taken to much more of a 4 part story, maybe 5...lol The the orgy in the basement on the rugs and with beer bottles too would have been great.

I don't understand where the reference to "LW" should be? I think "group sex" would be the right category. Or even better "SiFi"! 1*!!!

Incredibly confusing dialogue

1 star - sick SLUT crap

Surprised nobody drowned with all that cum splashing around! After a while the story just wasn’t sexy,just sloppily messy.

What a party. Thanks for your writing.

Why is it so hard for people to write believable dialogue. FFS, just read and ask yourself, "Would people actually talk like this?" When anyone is recounting events in this story, it's extremely cringey. Then the "Master Jon" & "Master Tom" shit literally coming out of nowhere? Awful.

I can't imagine any of these marriages lasting. Quite a unique universe depicted here. Wives are whores and husband's degenerate Neanderthals. Author has great imagination. Needs to ask a woman to help with lady dialog. Still it is a wild romp.

Typical fantasy bachelorette party, or is it? About 20% of females have some form of physical sex at these parties. May not be a fantasy. It happened to me. At the least I got the ring back. Her father took her and his wife home both of whom were nude. With in 6 months they divorced. But as IrishLaddy59 said "a wild romp" of a fantasy. Did not like it but gave it 3.5 stars any way.