All Comments on 'Amy's Dad'

The beginnings of what could be a very hot story line. Great opening Chapter!!! Waiting for the next installment, hope you solved the uploading issues with the site. Thank you.

This could be the first page of a good story or a really short unsatifying story, But you give us no clue if it's part one or complete.

I think its wonderfu;. Truly a good beginning to a long chaptered story. If only my own daughter thought as you do. congrats and keep writing...

This story is so real. I once saw my well hung uncle in a similar circumstance. None of my boyfriends even came close. Keep writing this is just starting to get interesting.

It was a good begining, but you didn't finish. Story was way to short and didn't reach the punch line. Finish what you started.

Oh, you are such a tease! Please continue this story.

Cute little fantasy. Make it the intro to something bigger and better, though. I like the little tease in the last sentence.

but too short ... <s>..

I agree with what has been said. Great start to a story. Please make part 2, im very curious!!!