All Comments on 'Amy's First Camping Trip'

by fireman_2000

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Surprise ending!

A quick followup is needed, she has 3 more days with him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please

Please if you are doing a sequel use a volunteer editor to pick up your mistakes which ruined some passages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing!

I wish there were more stories like this. I came like 3 times

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great!

Loved every word!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A cord of firewood

...is 4' by 8'. Nobody, regardless of their hair color, is going to be picking it up -- or burning it in 4 days.

merrySMmerrySM9 months ago

Decent story. Did not like the ending. Always feel ripped off with these types of endings.

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