by red_rose
Fantastic! Don't let the negative comments that will surely come bother you. You have a nice story going here and I hope to read more of it.
I really enjoyed this story. It was believable, plus it had a nice pace. Thanks for your story.
Regards,
Dorado
Fantastic story. Very easy to picture. Damn, I'm even jealous!
I've been in a couple of first-time MFM threesomes and you got that blend of anxiety and arousal down perfectly, which makes for a very erotic and believable story. I look forward to reading more from you!