by amy_lynn
Nice and hot... knowing they'd been lovers and that she wanted him again helped build the tension very well. Saving the "brother I speak so fondly of" line to the end was the shocker, but I figured it was on the way since this was posted in the incest section.
For your first story it was well written. Saving the brother part until the end was also well done, but I kind of figured that about half way through. I will be waiting for your next story.
Good story, I thought it might have been mother and son. Leaving the relationship between the two till the end was a master stroke. Look forward to more of your stories.
stupid if he has a girl friend why would he go see her and if he did why would he stay there and not a motel and only meet her in public or if he went to her appartment why wouldn't he just get up and leave when she started to suduce him totaly unrealistic you make him out to be a pussy whipped asshole