All Comments on 'Amy's Vacation Ch. 05'

Very erotic! I wish I had one those massage applications. Well done, yet again

Amy, I really like your story telling style. I was just thinking of Nakia and Alfreds portrayal of the sensual massage. A good descriptive visual as I recall in my mind now, hours after the read


xoxoxo


Daddy

Got us right...to...the.....edge... and then left us hanging until...? Very well done, Amy! I fully expected her to explode under Alfred's hands.

Please continue I need to know how the vacation continues how and who the tease and fuck

The story is good but just writing one page at a time makes it less interesting. You need to start writing at least two or more pages!! Cause just writing one page at a time is was waste of the readers time!!

Looking forward to further chapters!

Three stars. Seems like a cool storyline but it could've gone to the beach instead a measly massage.

Loved the way its written

How long till amy and daddy are truly life long lovers. She needs to show off a baby bump under her school uniform

Great story but it ended prematurely, hope you write some more.

Hahahaha…..great stuff, Amy! This was such an erotic tease. Love the way you described the hut and the massage. So much fun! Daddy and his little angel are having a wonderful time.

Extremely erotic..

What a real treat. I'd sure love one of those massages. MMmmm sounds heavenly.

Letting you take me down the "rabbit hole of pleasing touch," Amy, was like being on a guided tour through Wonderland. You were an excellent tour guide, and I too enjoyed the build up.

Oh what a lucky daddy to have such a Pretty Amy. I'm so glad she is enjoying her experiences so completely.

A lovely story.