by route137
Delicate and fragile, tightly written. One of the best I've read in a long time. I dare hope that with your obvious literary ability, you might like mine. Now, I'm off to read your other. Thank you, most sincerely.
Excellent. The characters were well developed, the scenes real. I am glad she didn't steal his money.
Bravo! I loved the story, is very well written. Kept my interest to the very end. Ahhh the mind of a woman is a dangerious thing .... and you showed it here. She used her mind, body and looks to her advantage. Their sex act was very intense .... Keep up your good work!
Having taken the train from Venice myself, I can easily picture the Mestre station, the motoscafe, the sights and sounds. You wrote this very well, in the De Maupassant tradition. Classic and hot, the best kind of story.