All Comments on 'An Ace in the Hole'

by route137

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
A quite outstanding story.

Delicate and fragile, tightly written. One of the best I've read in a long time. I dare hope that with your obvious literary ability, you might like mine. Now, I'm off to read your other. Thank you, most sincerely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The story is very believable.

Excellent. The characters were well developed, the scenes real. I am glad she didn't steal his money.

ShiningStarrShiningStarrover 13 years ago
Beautifully Done!

Bravo! I loved the story, is very well written. Kept my interest to the very end. Ahhh the mind of a woman is a dangerious thing .... and you showed it here. She used her mind, body and looks to her advantage. Their sex act was very intense .... Keep up your good work!

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
All In

Having taken the train from Venice myself, I can easily picture the Mestre station, the motoscafe, the sights and sounds. You wrote this very well, in the De Maupassant tradition. Classic and hot, the best kind of story.

bgoodladdybgoodladdyabout 13 years ago
Mmmm

Wow I loved reading this :) ty ty x

sassysaragracesassysaragraceabout 12 years ago
hot

Very hot! great sex between strangers.

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