All Comments on 'An Adopted Son'

I like this story. The threesome in the beginning was hot!

Keep up the good work.

it was a fucking hot story. liked the threesome part very much. towards the end i was just a little disappointed but still a good read.

I own a Miata. No way! That dick and boobs won't fit in a Miata, much less the rest of them!

As everyone else, I do agree that this story was great but the end was just a heartstoker, I can't believe he didn't get to f*** his own mom even though this is in the incest/taboo.

I hope this is continued but instead a little edited as to her or him jumping one another.

I know that probably wont happen but eh, you never know what an author might do.

but the ending was a disappointment. It would have really cemented the family ties if he had gone ahead and had sex with his mother after discovering the true relationship.She obviously was a type that would have welcomed it and might have brought the sister in to complete the family circle in a loving threesome.

I would not want my friends going out or having a sex with my mother.

Shame that this didn't go to what would have been a natural conclusion - they should have fucked. Good story all the same.

Talked to a total of three people. HI MOM. Put this in the fantasy category, totally unreal.

shouldn't be listed in incest section cause he didn't have sex with his mother........

I have to disagree with the other posters, despite only a handjob this was a very erotic story.

ok story, but should not be listed in incest.

Ill say wat i said before,on your other story for this contest,it doesnt matter what category its in. A good story is a good story. I gave you a 5 again because its a good story. Ive read stories in categories i didnt think id like, but i still appreciated them for good stories. As a matter of fact, i read a story from the nude day contest, that were in the top 3, and gave them a5. I dont nessecarily like fantacy stories, but it was written in a way that i liked it. I dont like the forced or gay stuff, especially not the gay stuff, but i read tis one forced one and i still gave it a 4 or5. So q good story is a good story no matter what. You did great dave, thank you. Good luck in the contest.

-A.

P.S. i hope one of your stories make it through.

This should not be listed in the incest category. It should be listed in the "guy-almost-accidently-commits-incest-but-then-does-the-right-thing" category

I'm sorry if I disappointed people with the ending of this story. I just felt it would be more appropriate and even a little touching if he didn't actually have sex with her before finding out she was his mother. I thought the mystery of him always wondering what could have been was a more interesting ending. I know many of you like and expect hardcore incest stories, but I wanted to write about a very close call.

you should right a sequel they should get drunk and get together for one night and maybe more

The story is labeled "Incest/Taboo." I assume "anonymous" can read, but just barely. How many times does it have to be said, "If stories of this kind disgust you, don't read them." Besides, this is FICTION, stupid. You understand the meaning of fiction, right?

Great story! Could you continue it?

I think it would have been hotter if they would have gone through with everything, then found out, continuing a sexual relationship as mother and son.

Great story until the very end!! . A FEW of my friends have taken her out!!..... There is NO WAY his mother would go out with his friends, let alone a FEW of them!! . He also doesn't seem bothered that a few of his friends may have fucked his mother!! You ruined a good story with just a couple of sentences!!

This exact thing happened to my adopted cousin, only it was in Cali and the sexes were reversed and she actually went all the way before finding out her new sugar daddy was her biological daddy. And they dated for over a year! They only found out when she got preggers and they did a paternity test. He got her mixed up in the swinging scene and later I stumble across some porno videos she did. We were never sure if she did them before during or after her year with father of the century.