by QuietElegance
Good read so far, like the setting and characters. I'm a sucker for a story with a "good" succubus. Can't wait to see how far you take this.
Always a fan of the "nice" succubus. To fall for the alluring seductress without it being the cause of our Hero's doom.
On another note, your writing is well edited. It reads smoothly and flows well.
I look forward to future installments.
I see you have another Succubus story posted. Does that mean this one is put aside?
I had the other idea in my head, and felt like writing something (moderately) different, but I do plan to keep adding to this. Thank you for asking!
looking forward to more. Like the world you've created and hoping for more sex scenes.
Wonderful stuff, I really enjoy all your work. I'm surprised by the sweet turn it took; I hope you continue to write and we get a genuine sex scene at some point.
This is a story I've been waiting for! All too often you read tales of the hero vs the villain. Common fare. But this? This is excellent. I wish to read more of the adventures of Brennan & Lily. I can tell Lily obviously is fond of him. But just how much? I think a knight & skirmisher would make an excellent pair! Kudos to you! Please write more chapters!
This is a wonderful story. Please continue it with more chapters!
It has been quite a while since this was posted.
The premise has a lot of potential
I would like to see the story continued
This series is honestly coming out quite well almost as good as your other series based on succubus, I hope you would continue this story and give it a nice romantic ending 😭
Man I really want to read similar mind control/seduction erotica with female taking control but not doing shitty things with men like beating unnecessarily or demeaning them