All Comments on 'An After School Lesson'

editing help.

Go to http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9 and read the 'Final List' sticky before checking out the 'Looking for an editor' sticky.

They can help you fix the your/you're their/they're/there et al mistakes before you publish.

Hi guys,

I'm new to writing fiction and I would appreciate any feedback you have. I hope you enjoyed this story. Part 2 is coming soon.