All Comments on 'An Afternoon Rendezvous'

Fix the grammar errors to push the rating up.

Great next chapter. Enjoying this but make the next chapter longer.

Holy hell! That was HAF! I do hope you have more stories. And could we get a backstory? What does he have over her that she gave it up in the first place? Though she doesnt seem to care now. I can only give five stars, but damn, i wish I could do more.

Jedd

she grinded against him, in tern. . . Perhaps she ground against him, in turn. . .

'someones going to hear her. . . ' Perhaps hear us ?

Fun little quickie between classes with a little too much disregard for her shirt/blouse, but wtf . . .

Please keep going with these two

Actually looking forward to more.

thanks for the comments! i really appreciate them. i do have plans to update this story for grammar and spelling so that should be done semi-soon. hopefully, it makes this story a bit more enjoyable.

Nothing beats a cute little sister hot for her big brothers cock. More please.

Very good. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Thank you.