All Comments on 'An Alien Spider's Love Ch. 02'

LOL, is that a good thing?

Going nicely. The only hint/criticism I can think of (besides the obvious) is to avoid "information overload" - try not to introduce too many new characters and ideas at once, as this might confuse the reader. Keep up the good work!

I really like the creative flow of your story, But it lacks description. For me, the best stories are the ones that you can see. Description places you there, like watching a movie in your head. Your spelling is atrocious by the way, not all of it just some of them. Good story keep it up.