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"Michelle," Randy said, "stop. When you wipe your face you will lick your fingers and swallow my cum. You like it."
Michelle did what she was instructed to do. "Oh, Randy," she said with a smile, "that was so amazing. There was so much of it! I even like the taste- kinda salty and sweet."
The inside windows were totally fogged all around the car. The analog clock on the dashboard said ten minutes of one. They had been going at it for two and a half hours straight and both teens needed a break. They re-dressed and straightened-up before returning to the front seat. Randy turned over the V-6 and rolled down all four windows. The night air was refreshing to both.
He turned to his date and said "Michelle, this was the best night of my life and you are the reason."
"Me too, Randy," she replied softly.
"Michelle, it's time to go home," he said. "When we get to your house I will walk you to the door and give you a goodnight kiss. You will remember it as our only kiss of the night and you will enjoy it. Everything else we've done you will forget unless I tell you to remember it later."
On Monday, Randy and Michelle met in astronomy class. They smiled and talked about how much fun they had on their date. Randy asked her if he could see her again, go to a movie or something, and she agreed with a broad smile.
Senior year was going to be amazing for both of them.
- COMMENTS
nighthawk222045 months agoFrankly, but not in a disparaging way, I think of all mind control as fantasy stories, but then, most of what we read in Literotica is fantasy, isn't it, however, still much of it is still highly erotic and this PP tale is one of those. Thanks for sharing. I would definitely like to read a lot more of Michelle's adventures with our very Randy teen.
NewGuyMichabout 2 years agoI loved the long, detailed sex scene… Not enough of that in most stories.
I also loved the naïve dialogue. Five stars and three thumbs up!
Anonymousover 5 years agoNot a bad piece of writing. If I had one note, it would be to work on the dialogue a bit so it sounds more natural. When I write, I say all dialogue aloud to make sure it sounds authentic.
Keep it coming!
swfb70over 5 years agoand was glad you did not have him use his powers to deflower her
would love to see a chapter 2
Anonymousover 5 years agoMy only complaint was that everything was too easy. I would have liked to have seen something go wrong and how Randy dealt with that. Still four stars though.
