All Comments on 'An American Angel from Heaven'

WHAT GOOD DOES IT DO TO TAKE OFF WET CLOTHES IN THE RAIN. SCREWING AND SLEEPING IN THE RAIN? MAYBE BUT I FOR ONE HAD A HARD TIME GETTING INTO THIS STORY, I THINK YOU DID A GOOD JOB WRITING, AND I'M SURE OTHERS WILL LOVE IT.

Very nice and sensual. And the healing of the ankle was nothing short of miraculous.

Oops, yes the ankle. Yes, he must have cured it with his cock! Thank you for pointing out this very obvious faux pas. Sign of an inexperienced writer getting carried away with the action rather than the detail!

I really liked this, the way you built the tension, the detail, the sensuality. Keep writing!

Not the usual holiday romance but a full-bloodied encounter with a stranger. The poor bedraggled waif isn't what she would appear to be (even the ankle isn't that damaged!). Overall the hot sex helps to camouflage the mini errors.